Heavily revised by A.W. Lawrence with instructions to the printer, 1936. The revisions were included in the edition of the diary published in Oriental Assembly (New York, 1940). The spine of the paper cover reads 'Diary 1911 Corrected'.

This proof copy may also have been the one deposited at the Copyright Receipt Office in May 1937 in order to secure the copyright (see Paul W. Nash & A.J. Flavell, The Corvinus Press (Aldershot, 1994), pp. 39-45).